IPMAT Indore 2020 (VA) - Besides offering physiological rewards such as toned muscles, <u>when regular karate is practiced the body can be turned into a dangerous weapon.</u> | PYQs + Solutions

IPMAT Indore 2020

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Besides offering physiological rewards such as toned muscles, when regular karate is practiced the body can be turned into a dangerous weapon.

one can turn the body into a dangerous weapon through karate, if it is practiced regularly

the body can be turned into a dangerous weapon as a result of karate if practiced regularly

when karate is practiced regularly, the body can be turned into a dangerous weapon

karate, if practiced regularly, can turn the body into a dangerous weapon

Correct Option: 4

One can turn the body into a dangerous weapon through karate, if it is practiced regularly: This option is incorrect because it uses a passive voice and is less concise. The phrase "one can turn the body" is wordier than necessary.
The body can be turned into a dangerous weapon as a result of karate if practiced regularly: This option is incorrect because it is somewhat wordy and slightly awkward in structure. "As a result of karate" is a bit cumbersome compared to more straightforward phrasing.
When karate is practiced regularly, the body can be turned into a dangerous weapon: This option is incorrect because while it is clear, it is not as concise and direct as the correct option.
Karate, if practiced regularly, can turn the body into a dangerous weapon: This option is correct. It is concise, clear, and directly states that regular practice of karate can turn the body into a dangerous weapon. It uses a straightforward cause-and-effect structure.